Помогите с грамотностью.

Вчера написал стихи на английском и вот усомнился в их грамотности. Помогите, заранее спасибо.

Why sometime we wants to forget our desire?!
Why sometime someone wants to destroy it?!

Tell me, tell me
When I hear the voice of river...
Show me, show me
How you keep your dream...

Why it's gone when I was needing in it
Why do you laugh?
Why do you laugh?
Why do you laugh at me?

Tell me, tell me
When I hear the voice of river...
Show me, show me
How you keep your dream...

Now, I'm feeling everybody is know
Time has come so long ago...
Now, you wanna turn back the clock
Time has come so long ago...