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My name is Timofey. I am ten years old. I live in Russia and go to school. I have a friend Misha. I like to speak with Misha. I speak Russian. I love my parents. My birthday is in spring, in March. I love summer very much. In summer I go to lake. I am very good pupil. I like to read a books. I and my father like to play computer games together.
Серик Ильясов
Серик Ильясов
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В начале: I have a friend. His name is Misha. I like talking to him.

В конце: l like to read books. Me and my father...

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Кайрат Рамазанов
Кайрат Рамазанов
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My name is Timofey. I am ten years old. I live in Russia and I speak Russian. I go to school. I have a friend . His name is Misha. I like to talk to Misha. My birthday is in March .It is spring. I love summer very much. In summer I go to the lake. I am a very good pupil. I like to read books. Together with father we like to play computer games . I love my parents.
Bekmurza Bazarbaev
Bekmurza Bazarbaev
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My name is Tim(ofey). I am ten years old. I live in Russia and go to school. I have a friend Misha. I like to speak with Misha. I speak Russian. I love my parents. My birthday is in spring, in March. I love summer very much. In summer I go to the lake. I am a very good pupil. I like to read books. My father and I like to play computer games together.
In summer I go to a lake. I am a very good pupil.
Ольга Саранск
Ольга Саранск
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Hi there. My name is Timofey. I am 10. I live in Russia. I study at elementary school. My friend's name is Misha. We like chatting. My birthday is at spring but my favorite season is summer. I love going to the lake at summer time. I like to study and read books also I love playing computer games with my dad.