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Murmansk is located on the rocky east coast of the Kola Bay of the Barents Sea. Murmansk is the world's largest city, one of the largest ports in Russia. The economy of the city is the Murmansk port - one of the largest ice-free ports in Russia. Murmansk port is a port of registry barque "Sedov", the largest sailing ship in the world. Also assigned to the port all Russian nuclear-powered icebreakers. The main sectors of the economy are the Murmansk fishing and fish processing (valid fish processing), shipping, shipbuilding, marine, rail and road transport, metalworking, food processing, marine geology, exploration work on the shelf of the Arctic seas. Other major companies of the city: - "Murmansk Shipping Company", "Union of Fishermen of the North", "Murmansk Shipyard Minmorflot", "NSR", "Arcticmorneftegasrazvedka" Scientific and Production Enterprise "Morgeo" and the largest in the fishing industry "Murmansk trawl fleet ".
In Murmansk prevails maritime climate. The summers are short and cold, and the winters are long and mild. Snow lies in an average of 210 days and completely goes to May. Polar night in the latitude of Murmansk lasts from the 2 of December to the 11 of January, the polar day - from the 22 of May to the 22 of July.
The city has two regional museums: The Murmansk Regional Museum, established in 1926, and Murmansk Regional Art Museum, opened in 1989 in one of the oldest stone buildings in Murmansk. Some companies and organizations have their own museum dedicated to the history and activities of the organizations, including the Museum of the Northern Fleet. Murmansk has three professional theaters. The oldest in the city is The Murmansk Regional Puppet Theater (opened in 1933) which moved in 1946 from Kirovsk. The largest in the city, The Murmansk regional drama theater, was opened in 1939. In 1946 it moved from the Polar Drama Theatre of the Northern Fleet, established in 1936. Murmansk Philharmonic is home to Murmansk Philharmonic Orchestra, which was founded in 1999. Chief conductor of the past 6 years was a young British conductor Damian Iorio. There are 38 libraries in Murmansk, including three regional: Murmansk Regional Scientific Library, Murmansk Regional Children and Youth Library - the largest in the Arctic Circle specialized library for children and young people and Murmansk Regional Special Library for the Blind.
In Murmansk, located 296 sports facilities, including 2 sports hall, 2 large stadium, 4 swimming pools, 6 ski centers, 3 ski centers, 1 athletics arena gym and 93. In the city are more than 50 sports. The most famous sports clubs - football team of the city of Murmansk "North", serving in the second division, and the team Super League Bandy "Murman".
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