напишите пожалуйста перевод опенинка the vampire knight(Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi)

Держите, перевод на английский:

Swaying in red, red, red
To the edge of the dream's dream
I won't let go of you

How often have we given up to this stiffling pressure?
My emotions that have no place to go wake me up
That pure smile is so cruel
It knows that we're existences far apart

Even though incurable wounds just eats away at my heart
The emotions (that dwell) even now (in the) darkness, I can't kill them

Shaking in red, in red, in red
To the edge of the dream's dream
Destiny began to turn as we met
A secret that nobody, nobody knows
Fall, fall, fall
Even by cutting through my sins I can't turn back anymore,
Surely

While I was walking in the abyss of loneliness, I was saved
By those unchanging, real eyes
Even though the light is too bright, the new-born shadow
Deep and vivid, creeps up

The two heartbeats are exactly like mirrors facing each other
(The pain) that's alike (yet so) different continues infinitely

Burning in red, red, red
Erase everything, everything
Unfulfilled illusions begin to move
Strongly, strongly, this ephemeral night
Crossing, crossing, crossing it
Even by drowning in sins I can't escape,
Surely

Swaying in red, red, red
To the edge of the dream's dream
Destiny began to turn as we met
A secret that nobody, nobody knows
Fall, fall, fall
Even by cutting through my sins I can't turn back,
Surely

И перевод на русский (из субтитров с Kage):

За красными мечтами,
За красными, красными мечтами.. .
Как много раз сдавались мы давлению судьбы?
Вскоре распрощаемся с чувством, будто некуда бежать.
Неужели невинная улыбка померкнет пред жестокостью?
Я знаю что мы лишь влачим существование.. .
Невидимые раны сердце съедают,
Даже сейчас, во тьме,
На уме лишь мысли о тебе
За красными, красными мечтами.. .
За красными, красными мечтами, мы, двое встретились.
Наши судьбы начались
Секрет, что никто не знает
Падая, падая, падая,
вернутся не дано.
Не важно как далеко мы от грехов,
Совсем.. .

P.S. "Опенинг" пишется.