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I wiil visit first Great Britain. In my opinion, this country is very special and mysterious, it is the native land of English language.There are many places, which should be visited. Among them:
Westminster Abbey
Buckingham palace
The London Tower
Madame Tussauds museum and Planetarium
National gallery
Stonehendge
The mayoralty
The British museum
Russian constructivism
Bank of England
Барбикан
Manhattan on Thames
The Trafalgar area
Parliament building in Westminster
Chamber of Lords
The House of Commons
Round Uajtholita
Westminster Cathedral
Royal palaces
From Madame Tussauds museum to the Hyde park
From Piccadilly to the Trafalgar area
Сохо and Kovent-Garden
Sacred Pavel's cathedral
Thames
Palace of Lambert
City of London
St. Maria's church
Palace of Sacred Iakova
Z.Frejda's museum
National gallery of Scotland
Bush-house
Ridzhent-strit
Big Ben
Sherlock Holmes's house
Roadway of Giants
Glenn Mor
Fer-Ajl
White rocks of Dover
Bamburgh Castle
Bodiam Castle
Lock Kaerfili
Westminster Cathedral
Windsor palace
Parliament
The Edinburgh Lock
Cathedral of Sacred Gilja
Lock Holirudhaus
The Edinburgh zoo(здесь можно сократить) and others.

England is the native land of many great people, such as
1. Sir Winston Churchill,
2. Isambard Kingdom Brunel,
3. Diana, Princess of Wales
4. Charles Darwin
5. William Shakespeare
6. Sir Isaac Newton
7. Queen Elizabeth I
8. John Lennon
9. Vice Admiral Horatio Nelson,
10. Oliver Cromwell
Great Britain is the island stste, and it is very interesting fot me. The especial climate there. I consider that London it is a pearl of Europe. That is why travel to England is my dream