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Most teenagers dream to get a good education, have good work and be productive members of society. The period of maturation is a difficult time for teenagers. They all want to become independent as soon as possible. To be independent means to be responsible for themselves, for their actions. We have a wonderful youth, a lot of talented young people who supported the state. The future of young Belarusians also depends on the youth policy. The main purpose of this policy is to create the necessary conditions to realize the creative potential of young people. Youth organizations help Belarusian teenagers to find their place in society. Members of the Belarusian Republican Youth Union carry out much community work.

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The majority of the teenagers dream to receive good formation, to have good work and to be the active members of a society. The period of adultions - uneasy time for the teenagers. All of them want to become independent as soon as possible. To be independent means to be responsible for itself, for the acts. We perfect youth, have a lot of talented young people, which are supported by the state. The future of the young Byelorussians also depends on youth politics of the state. An overall objective of this politics is the creation of necessary conditions for realization of creative potential of youth. The youth organizations help the Byelorussian teenagers to find the place in a society. The members of the Byelorussian Republican Union of Youth will carry out the large public work.