Нахлынуло. Придумала сопливый стишок (англ) жизненный лишь отчасти. Оцените, и укажите ошибки :3 Внутри сам "шедевр"

I fallen in love with him in tenth form
In those times i was happy that i have born
Then i dared to say about my feelings to him
But instead of answer he had only grin
I was so dissapointed and i wanted to die
But i am not a not a self-murderer i could only cry