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i am Belichenko Alex. Alex is my name and Belichenko is my surname. I am 16 years old. I want to tell you a few words about my family.

I think that a family is a very important thing for everybody. A family is the people that always love you, support you and help you. For me it is impossible to live without my family. My family is not large. I have got a mother, a father and a my cat. There are four of us in the family. We also have grandparents and a lot of relatives.

First of I’d like to say a few words about my parents. My mother is a good-looking woman with blond hair. She is forty-two but she looks much younger.she works in the hypermarket . She likes her job very much. My mother keeps the house and takes care of my father and us. She is very good at cooking. She always cooks very delicious meals. Our mother is very kind, but sometimes he is strict to us. She always checks if our homework is done. Mother takes care of our free time, so that we are not able to waste our time.

My father working at the construction and restoration of bridges . He is forty-five. He is a professional. My father does his work very well and gets good money. He is also handy with many things. He can fix almost everything. . My parents have been married for 17 years already. They have much in common, but they have different views on music, books, and films. For example my father likes thrillers and my mother likes adventure films and fantasy. My father is fond of football and chess. My mother likes playing ping pong. My parents work a lot.

My grandmother and my grandfather are pensioners. She lives far away from us. She is fond of knitting. The library that we

As for my .i am has not decided What I want to do .. I like to say I am very like sports .it can be said i whole life engaged sport .Ya think that the sport will be like passion .but have a year to decide what to do next

We all get on with each other very well. Every one in our family is rather busy, but we are always very happy if we have a possibility to spend some time together. My family means a lot to me.