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For every person in the world happiness individually. The greatest happiness it`s getting good graduation, wedding, birth of a child ...I am only 17 years old, and I will have that happiness only in a few years. Nowadays the greatest happiness for me over the years is a trip to any country where I have not been yet. I`m crazy about new people, new culture – something new that I have never known. The dream became a reality in 2010. I just turned 15 years old and I had to go with my family to Russia. It was my best summer holiday. Three days we were on a train through the Kazakh prairie and some Russian towns. So I saw Orenburg, Samara. Our relatives met us in Moscow. And than… It was fantastic! We visited a lot of interesting places: Red Square and the Alexander Garden, the Tretyakov Gallery, the Tsaritsyno... I met friends with whom I chatted in the internet for a long time. After Moscow, we visited Saint-Petersburg. It's a fairy-tale city! Most of all I remember the trip by boat on the river Neva. Now I think I remember every day of this journey. It was an unforgettable experience and a lot of joy. If in the future it will get such chance as travelling, despite the fact that I liked Russia very much, I will choose another country. I want to know the world completely. For me happiness means travelling.

Даха · Accepted Answer

For every person in the world happiness is individual. The greatest happiness is getting a good education, marriage, birth of a child ...I am only 17 years old, and I shall have that happiness only in a few years. Nowadays, the greatest happiness for me over the years is a trip to any country where I have not been yet. I`m crazy about new people, new culture – something new that I have never known. The dream became a reality in 2010. I had just turned 15 years old and I had to go with my family to Russia. It was my best summer holiday. Three days we were travelling by train through the Kazakh prairie and some Russian towns. So I saw Orenburg, Samara. Our relatives met us in Moscow. And then… It was fantastic! We visited a lot of interesting places: Red Square and the Alexander Garden, the Tretyakov Gallery, the Tsaritsyno... I met the friends I had chatted with in the internet for a long time. After Moscow, we visited Saint-Petersburg. It's a fairy-tale city! Most of all I remember the trip by boat on the river Neva. Now I think I remember every day of this journey. It was an unforgettable experience and a lot of joy. If in the future I get such a chance to travel, despite the fact that I liked Russia very much, I will choose another country. I want to know the world completely. To me happiness means travelling.

София Живилова · Answer

Всё правильно!!!

Гайк · Answer

happiness is indidually, happiness is getting, I would have this happiness, In a three days, happiness means travelling to me.