Помогите выполнить задание по английскому

Question

My family 
 
My family is large. I have got a mother, a father, a grandmother, a grandfather, a brother and a sister. 
We are from Russia. My mother is a kind, nice woman. Her name is Olga Ivanovna. She is thirty. She is a teacher. 
My father is an engineer. His name is Oleg Petrovich. He is thirty- two. My mother and my father have got two sons and a daughter. My name is Pete. I am eight. I’m a pupil. I want to be an engineer. My brother is twelve. His name is Mike. He is a pupil too. He wants to be a driver. My sister is not a pupil. She is a nice little girl. She is five. Her name is Helen. 
My mother has got her parents. They are my grandmother and my grandfather. My grandpa is fifty-six. He is a worker. My grandmother is fifty- four. She is a doctor. 
My father has got a sister and a brother. They are my aunt and my uncle. My aunt is a doctor and my uncle is a pilot. My family is friendly. We are all fine. 
How I love my family !

Алексей Пискунов · Accepted Answer

Ты молодец! Только некоторые из этих оборотов речи звучат странновато на английском. (My sister is not a pupil.) 
My sister does not go to school. She is only five. She is a nice little girl. 
(I have got a mother, a father, a grandmother, a grandfather, a brother and a sister.) 
I my family I have: my mother, ..

Даша Кузнецова · Answer

У меня большая семья. У меня есть мать, отец, бабушка, дедушка, брат и сестра. 
Мы живём в России. Моя мама очень добрая, хорошая женщина. Зовут ее Ольга Ивановна. Ей тридцать лет. Она работет учительницей. 
Мой отец - инженер. Его зовут Олег Петрович. Ему уже тридцать два. У мамы с отцом два сына и дочь. Меня зовут Пит. Мне восемь лет. Я учусь в школе. Я хочу стать инженером. Моему брату - двенадцать лет. Его зовут Майк. Он тоже школьник. Он хочет стать водителем. Моя сестра не ходит в школу. Она милая маленькая девочка. Ей пять лет. Её зовут Хелен. 
У мамы есть родители. Это моя бабушка и мой дедушка. Моему дедушке пятьдесят шесть лет. Он - рабочий. Моей бабушке пятьдесят четыре года. Она работает врачом. 
У моего отца есть сестра и брат. Это моя тётя и мой дядя. Моя тётя врач, а мой дядя-летчик. У нас дружная семья. У всех нас всё нормально. 
Как я люблю свою семью !

Машулька · Answer

я бы еще кое-что подправила: there are 6 of us: myself, parents, grandparents, a sister and a brother. 
звучит более "АНГЛИЙСКО" )))

Костя · Answer

a little bit correction 
 
 My Family 
 
My family is large. I ^ve got a mother, a father, a grandmother, a grandfather, a brother and a sister. 
We are from Russia. My mother is a kind and a nice woman. Her name is Olga Ivanovna. She is thirty. She is a teacher. 
My father is an engineer. His name is Oleg Petrovich. He is thirty- two. My mother and my father have got two sons and a daughter. My name is Pete. I am eight. I’m a pupil. I want to be an engineer as my father . My brother is twelve. His name is Mike. He is a pupil too. He wants to be a driver. My sister is not a pupil. She is a nice little girl. She is five. Her name is Helen. 
My mother has got her parents. They are my grandmother and my grandfather. My grandpa is fifty-six. He is a worker. My grandmother is fifty- four. She is a doctor. 
My father has got a sister and a brother. They are my aunt and my uncle. My aunt is a doctor and my uncle is a pilot. My family is friendly. We are all fine. 
How I love my family !