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Знатоки английского, написала рассказ,нужно проверить и исправить грамматику. Я попыталась предл ставить в Future Simple

Kate is at Antolya Airport alone. Instructions for Katie. What to do at the airport? At the information desk. Kate will need go at the information desk and ask where a check-in desk. As well need will know her flight on time. At the check-in desk. Kate will need join a queue at the check-in desk. Then it will be necessary to answer the questions of the airport staff and put the baggage on the scales. Kate must careful about weight limit is twenty-three kilos per person otherwise then she has to pay the extra 25 pounds. At the security check. When security checks can not take water and metal objects. Her will have to take off coat and pull out all of your pocket. Shoes will not remove. Kate will have to open the bag. Finally, she will look at the information board to see wheather her flight is on time. She will going in to land. If the flight is delayed then Kate will be going to the cafe.
Надюшка Колобаева
Надюшка Колобаева
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At the information desk. Kate will need TO go TO the information desk and ask where THE check-in desk IS. ALSO SHE will need TO know IF her flight IS on time.
At the check-in desk. Kate will need TO join a queue at the check-in desk. Then it will be necessary to answer the AIRPORT ASSISTANTS' questions and put the LUggage on the scales. Kate must careful about weight limit, BECAUSE IT is twenty-three kilos per person otherwise she WILL HAVE to pay extra 25 pounds.
At the security check. YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO take water and metal objects. SHE will have to take off HER coat and pull out EVERYTHING FROM HER pocketS. Shoes will not BE removeD. Kate will ALSO have to open HER bag.
Finally, she will look at the information board to see whether her flight is on time. THEN she will get on board. If the flight is delayed then Kate will GO to the cafe.

Поправил что мог.
Вообще корявовато, и форма глагола need в будущем времени как-то не смотрится. Лучше, наверное, заменить на will have to.

Must BE careful, конечно! Спасибо за подсказку. Не заметил, пропустил.
Вообще, я б should be careful сказал.
Леонид Кравченко
Леонид Кравченко
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----> добавил бы что Kate must BE careful about weight limit а так всё норм
Александра Викулова
Александра Викулова
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At the information desk. Kate SHOULD go TO the information desk and ask where IS THE check-in desk. ALSO SHE should FIND OUT IF her flight IS on time.
At the check-in desk. Kate SHOULD join a queue at the check-in desk. Then it will be necessary to answer the AIRPORT ASSISTANTS' questions and put HER LUggage on the scales. Kate must BE careful about weight limit, BECAUSE IT is twenty-three kilos per person otherwise she WILL HAVE to pay extra 25 pounds.
At the security check. YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO take water and metal objects. SHE will have to take off HER coat and pull out EVERYTHING FROM HER pocketS. Shoes will not BE removeD (это вообще непонятно, что имелось в виду) . Kate should ALSO open HER bag.
Finally, she should look at the information board to see whether her flight is on time. THEN she will get on board. If the flight is delayed then Kate may wait for the flight in a cafe.
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