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Are the verbs in the following offers are placed correctly ?

Yersterday as I was walking down the Strand, I met George, an old friend of mine. He recognize me at once, though I weard a scarf round my face as I was suffering from toothache. He told me how sorry he to see me in such a poor way and added: "I came to see you a fortnight ago but unfortunately we was prepareing an annual accounts and as one of my colleagues was ill, I couldnt find time to get round you." All the time he was saying that I was trying to remember somthing I went to tell him. Eventually I remembered and sayd him: "Just before I was coming out I received a letter from Smith, in which he sayed that he was hoping you would phone him soon. He last saw you at Marion`s birthday party but you was talking so animatedly Mike that he did not interrupt" . Just then I saw another friend of mine. He was waving to me from the other side of the road. While I crossed the road, a car rushed from nowhere and knocked me down. Lucklily I fell into an open crate of bananas, which a barrow-boy was selling so I Isustain no great injury - though the bananas did.

Past simple or Past continuous verb must be there.
"All the time he was saying that I was trying to remember somthing I went to tell him."
All the time he was saying that I tried to remember something I was going to tell him.
Есть устойчивый оборот - be going to - намереваться что-то сделать,
поэтому I went to tell - явная ошибка.
"and sayd him: "Just before I was coming out I received a letter from Smith, in which he sayed that he was hoping you would phone him soon"
HE sayd, a said. "Just before I came out I received" - Перед самым выходом я получил письмо. Дальше опять: не Sayed, a said.
"...at Marion`s birthday party but you was talking so animatedl..."
you were talking - так должно быть. Не was, a were.
"While I crossed the road,..." - в момент, когда я переходил улицу.. . Тут должОн быть Past continuous:
While I was crossing the road...
.. I sustained no great injury -
Тане4Ка Муравьёва
Тане4Ка Муравьёва
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Many mistakes.
Yersterday as I was walking down the Strand, I met George, an old friend of mine. He recognized me at once, though I wore a scarf round my face as I was suffering from toothache. He told me how sorry he was to see me in such a poor way and added: "I came to see you a fortnight ago but unfortunately we were preparing an annual accounts and as one of my colleagues was ill, I couldnt find time to get round you." All the time he was saying that I was trying to remember somthing I went to tell him. Eventually I remembered and said: "Just before I was coming out I received a letter from Smith, in which he said that he hoped you would phone him soon. He last saw you at Marion`s birthday party but you were talking so animatedly to Mike that he did not interrupt" . Just then I saw another friend of mine. He was waving to me from the other side of the road. While I was crossing the road, a car rushed from nowhere and knocked me down. Lucklily I fell into an open crate of bananas, which a barrow-boy was selling so I sustained no great injury - though the bananas did.
Юрий Чернаков
Юрий Чернаков
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He recognised me....though I've been wearing a scarf around my face....He told me how sorry he was....but unfortunately I we were... I was trying to remember something I wanted to tell him... and said him... in which he said....he was waving at me....while i was crossing the road....I sustained no...
Sonya Alibekova
Sonya Alibekova
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второе предложение - recognized
дальше - wore a scarf
how sorry he was to see me
we were preparing
I was going to tell him
said him
in which he said
you were talking
while I was crossing the road
I fall
Ошибок очень много! Просматривала текст быстро, возможно, что-то упустила