Кто может подкорректировать рассказ о себе на английском?

Hello,a few words about myself. My name is Andy. I’m twenty three. I’m a student of the Stavropol state university and I like studying here very much, though it’s sometimes difficult as I already have a work.
I work as the engineer in special astrophysical observatory.
At university I study at the first year magistracies of chair of the general physics, the direction "physics of the earth and planets".( здесь я хочу сказать, что учусь на первом курсе магистратуры, кафедры общей физики, направления 'физика земли и планет"
This direction well coincides with in what I plan to be engaged further on the work. ( О точ, что это направление хорошо совпадает тем, что я в дальнейшем планирую делать на своей работе. )

The subject of my master dissertation is very interesting and actual: "Creation of system of monitoring of 'астроклиматических' parameters in a place to installation of the 'Большой Телескоп Альт - Азимутальный", me is pleasant to work over it. (Название магистерской диссертации, то что мне нравится работать над этой темой. )

As far as I can see my character is cheerful in general. I’m normally a happy and an optimistic person. I have a good sense of humor and consider myself a good mixer. I think my main shortcoming is that I’m hot-tempered sometimes, but this normally doesn’t affect my relations with people.
As for my preferences, I like watching good films, reading detective and love stories. As for sport I’m not very fond of it.