Написал текст на завтра на английский :Письмо другу (Напишите правиль или нет ,если что подправте?).

Dear Anton,

How are the things going on? Did something new happenD in your life? I wanted to reply immediately to your letter I wanted to answer it immediately. (Я хотел ответить незамедлительно на твоё письмо, я хотел ответить на него незамедлительно - не то что-то Вы хотели, видимо, сказать) But I was working a lot during the last two weeks.

Now I want to tell you about my next winter vacation. (Речь о будущем отдыхе, ведь так? )

I wanted to spend it in the mountains.(тогда почему здесь идёт прошлое время? Должно быть настоящее) Skiing is very popular sport in my country. It is very interesting. I began to ski in my childhood with my father and sister. We very often have been in wood and spend our time there. ( We spent together a lot of time, skiing in the forest) I think the (Мне кажется, предлог тут не нужен) fresh air, clear nature and sport is (are) very health to me. That('s) why my favourite hobby is skiing.

The mountain-skiing base is situated in Karpaty. This base is very popular and many people visit it every year. There are 4 skiing trace. Three of them are for the skiing and one (is) for the snoWbord. Also there is AN elevator, cafe and the houseS, where you can take a rest. The trace is near (Have about) 3 kilometres. The speed that you can develop there is very big (Great).

AFTER THIS I wanted (настоящее время - want) to visit my grandfather WHO liveS in the country town of Kazakhstan Karaganda. This IS very wonderfulL and beautifulL city. I miss about him. (About надо убрать)

So that is my all holidayS. Write me more often.

GooD luck.

Yours truly,

VlaD.

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