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20 years ago my mum was 15 years old. She was slim, She had long streight fair hair. She lived with my grandmother (her mother).She was not very good at learning and often went to children's camp. When she had finished the school she entered the medical school. After that she works at the hospital as a nurse. When she was suturing the woman's wound, she pricked her hand with a needle and she cought jaundice. In the meantime my father catches it too and they both are in the same hospital. My mother, waiting her appointment in queue to see the doctor, notices the slender dark-haired man (my father) and since they have begun to communicate with each other and have got acquainted closer. After recovery they move to live at the mother's place then the wedding and the family life.Well, my parents met and fell in love with each other.

Если Афродита и Дашуня ТАК сказали, то и добавить больше нечего - бездарям везде у нас дорога; -)

absol'utno soglasna s Mashanei. perevod ne blistatel'ny, m'agko govor'a... 1) ne tochny; 2) stillisticheski i grammaticheski neverny: ispol'zovanie nastoiashego vremeni v znachenii proshedshego v rus. iazyke - rasprostranennoe iavlenie, v angliskom - nedopustimo. da i voobshe mnogo russifizmov.
a tovarishu Dashune nado snachala douchit's'a, porabotat' chut'-chut', a potom hvastat's'a i nazyvat' seb'a professionalom.

20 years ago my mom (mother) was 15. She was a slim girl with long straight fair (blond) hair. She used to live with my grandma (grandmother), her mom. My mom wasn't a good student, but she used to go to summer camps a lot. When my mom finished high school, she entered nurses (medical) school and got a job at a hospital as a nurse. Once when she was sawing up a patient's wound, she stubbed herself with a needle and got (caught) Hepatitis B (jaundice). My father got the same disease at the same time. And they both found themselves at the same hospital. My mom noticed a tall dark haired guy (who turned out to be my future dad) when she was standing in the line (queue) to the doctor's office, since then they started seeing each other, got to know each other better. After full recovery they moved into my mom's place. Then there was a wedding, and the married life began. This is how my parents met and fell in love with each other.

О!!!! Афродита, ты ---молодчинка!! !
всё правильно перевела!!! !
я говорю, как истинный профи (сама учусь на филолога.... знаю 3 языка: англ., нем. и франц. )
Думаю, тебе стоит серьезно заняться переводами :)
Не зарывай талант в землю!!! !
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My mother was fifthteen years old twenty years ago.She was thick withlong straight blond hair.She lived with my grandmother(her mom).She didn't study good and often went camping.When she graduated from the school, she went for a doctor.After that she becomes a nurse,and when was sewing up a wound of a woman,she pricked herself and became ill for jaundice.My father got ill too.They were in the same hospital.Suddenly my mother noticed a tall brownhaired man(my dad)