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I live in is not very large flat. There are two rooms and a kitchen,a bathroom and a toilet in our flat. I live in a room with my parents. In our room there are a large sofa,a bed,a television,a computer,a wardrobe and a capboard. Next to my room there is another room, where live my grandmother and my grandfather. There are a bed and two armchairs, a table and a television. This room is very small. We have a kitchen.It is large. In The kitchen there is large table,where we drink and eat lunch. Opposite the kitchen there are a bathroom and a toilet. My toilet is very little , and my bathroom is very comfortable. My flat is not very large,but i like it. Правильно?
так... начнем.. .

1 - In our room there IS a large sofa,a bed,a television,a computer,a wardrobe and a capboard.
2 - There IS a bed and two armchairs, a table and a television
3-In The kitchen there is A large table...
4-Opposite the kitchen there IS a bathroom and a toilet.
посмотри пожалуйста как ты написала и как правильно ,=) сруктура there is употребляется если после нее стоит существительное в единственном числе, не смотря на то что там дальше идет перечисление . например there is a bed and an armchair in the corner of my room.
Нина Кочетова
Нина Кочетова
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Нина Кочетова и еще лучше лучше скажи * my flat isn`t large * вместо первого предложения
Текс у тебя замечательный, вот только ПРЕДМЕТ допиши-ответов будет больше
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Мамедов Джамал текс то может и замечательный ...а вот ошибок....
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Анатолий Повельев I live in not very large flat.

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My apartment is very small. There are two rooms and a kitchen,a bathroom and a toilet in our flat. I live in a room with my parents. there is a large sofa,a bed,a television,a computer,a wardrobe and a capboard In our room. Next to my room there is another room, where live my grandmother and my grandfather live. There are a bed and two armchairs, a table and a television in there. That room is very small as well. But we have a good size kitchen. We love our large table,where we drink tea and eat lunch. Opposite to the kitchen there is are a bathroom and a toilet. The toilet is very small, but and the bathroom is very comfortable. My flat is not very large,but i like it.
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Boris Fleitikh
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