Добрый вечер! Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст на английском.

Добрый вечер! Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст на английском. Мне кажется, что у меня здесь много ошибок. Буду благодарна за помощь!

This story about a little girl, whose name is Sara Crew. She was only seven years old. Sara had black and heavy hair, big greenish eyes with long, black lashes.
Sara had always lived in India, with her father, but he decided to enroll her at Miss Minchin’s boarding school for girls in London, in order to prepare her a future life in society.
Sara appeared in the school for girls like a princess because of she was the rich man’s daughter, Captain Crew. Her mother had died when Sara was born. And her father was the only relation she had in the world. He brought up his daughter in love, care and luxury.
Probably, untold wealth can spoil anyone, but Sara has grown is clever, kind and honest girl. Sara can and likes to dream, made up the stories. These stories were very amazing and beautiful, in which she told about mermaids, angels, fairies and princesses.
However, she’s rich clothes, toys and her own room and the ability to invent the stories aroused the envy of the other girls. Yet, during this time Sara was able to make friends with some girls.
When she had a birthday and the holiday has already begun a terrible tragedy happened. Before it happened Captain Crew and his friend join together to develop the diamond mines. After Captain Crew died of jungle fever and business troubles combined.
Sara lost her beloved father. She was left without means of livelihood. Miss Minchin kicked Sara out from her room and she settles her in the attic. She said that Sara must very much work now that she can stay in the school. Everything that Sara has now it is doll Emily, which her father gave her.
I think that the most terrible it is lost the dear and favorite people for you. Sara stayed all alone, little and poor girl, which to go through many difficulties. But, I hope as a result she will live happy and will find people, which will love and not lost her.