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НЕ ВЕРЬ НИКОМУ КРОМЕ МЕНЯ-ВСЕ ОСТАЛЬНЫЕ ПЕРЕВОДИЛИ НЕ ПРАВИЛЬНО!!! IЭто мой вариант:
I'd like to introduce myself.My name is Valentina Tuleniva.I'm 35 years old.I was born in Kazahstan.I moved to Orinburg in 1998.I'm married.My husband's name is Oleg.He works in the Oil Company.I have a daughter.her name is Kate.She is 15.She is in the nineth form.She goes to the music school.She likes singing. I'm carry on bisiness.I have got a small shop.I like my job and the most important is that I am good at it.
I entered The Orinburg Menegement State University this year.My small family and I like to spend our free time together.We almost go to The Black Sea.I'm fond of cooking, and I make delicious pies.I like reading in my free time.My favourite writer is Paulo Koelyo(в правописании имени не уверена). I like to listen to good music.If to describe my appiarence,I am an elderly woman with a middle-sized figure.with brown not very long hair,with green eyes.A lot of people say that I'm a pretty good woman.

Так ты Екатерина или Валентина?

Вообщем вот так!
I want to appear. My name is Valentina, last name of Tyuleneva. I am 35 years. I borned in Kazakhstan. In 1998 moved to live to Orenburg. I married. My husband's name is Oleg. He works in an oil company. I have daughter Ekaterina. She is 15 years, to study she in a 9 class. Занимается at musical school, likes to sing.
I carry on business. For me, there is a little shop. My work to me very much liked, and most important, that turns out not bad for me. This year I entered the Orenburgskiy State institute of management.
I and my small family favourite, to rest together. Mainly we ride on the black Sea coast.
I like to be engaged in the house. Very well I prepare and bake vkusneyshie piraguas. In own time I like to honour. My favourite writer Paulo Koel'o. I like to listen good music.
If to describe my original appearance, I am a young woman of middle growth, middle build. Hairs are light brown, middle length. Eyes- of green color. In opinion of many for me pretty pleasant exterior.

Вообщем вот так!
I want to appear. My name is Valentina, last name of Tyuleneva. I am 35 years. I borned in Kazakhstan. In 1998 moved to live to Orenburg. I married. My husband's name is Oleg. He works in an oil company. I have daughter Ekaterina. She is 15 years, to study she in a 9 class. Занимается at musical school, likes to sing.
I carry on business. For me, there is a little shop. My work to me very much liked, and most important, that turns out not bad for me. This year I entered the Orenburgskiy State institute of management.
I and my small family favourite, to rest together. Mainly we ride on the black Sea coast.
I like to be engaged in the house. Very well I prepare and bake vkusneyshie piraguas. In own time I like to honour. My favourite writer Paulo Koel'o. I like to listen good music.
If to describe my original appearance, I am a young woman of middle growth, middle build. Hairs are light brown, middle length. Eyes- of green color. In opinion of many for me pretty pleasant exterior.

It wish to be presented. My name is Valentina, a surname of Tjuleneva. To me of 35 years. I was born in Kazakhstan. In 1998 has moved to live to Orenburg. I married. My husband call Oleg. It works in the oil company. I have daughter Ekaterina. 15 years to study in it she in 9 class. Is engaged at musical school, likes to sing. I am engaged in business. I, have a small shop. My work very much to be pleasant to me, and the most important thing that at me not bad it turns out. This year I have arrived in the Orenburg State institute of management. I and my small family we love, to have a rest together. Basically we go on the Black Sea coast. I like to be engaged in the house. Very well I prepare also for a pitch вкуснейшие pies. At leisure I like to esteem. My favourite writer Paulo Koelo. I like to listen to good music. If to describe my appearance I am a young woman of average growth, an average constitution. Hair fair-haired, average length. Eyes - of green colour. According to many at me pleasant enough appearance.

Для мама что ли делала?

It wish to be presented. My name is Valentina, a surname of Tjuleneva. To me of 35 years. I was born in Kazakhstan. In 1998 has moved to live to Orenburg. I married. My husband call Oleg. It works in the oil company. I have daughter Ekaterina. 15 years to study in it she in 9 class. Is engaged at musical school, likes to sing. I am engaged in business. I, have a small shop. My work very much to be pleasant to me, and the most important thing that at me not bad it turns out. This year I have arrived in the Orenburg State institute of management. I and my small family we love, to have a rest together. Basically we go on the Black Sea coast. I like to be engaged in the house. Very well I prepare also for a pitch вкуснейшие pies. At leisure I like to esteem. My favourite writer Paulo Koelo. I like to listen to good music. If to describe my appearance I am a young woman of average growth, an average constitution. Hair fair-haired, average length. Eyes - of green colour. According to many at me pleasant enough appearance.

I would like to introduce myself. My name is Valentine, name Tyuleneva. I am 35 years old. I was born in Kazakhstan. In 1998, moved to live in Orenburg. I'm married. My husband's name is Oleg. He works in the oil company. I have a daughter, Catherine. She was 15 years old, learn it in grade 9. He is at a music school, loves to sing.
I am engaged in business. I have a small shop. My work is very nice, but most importantly, I have not bad at it. This year I entered the Orenburg State Institute of Management.
I and my small family love, have a rest together. Basically we are going to the Black Sea coast.
I like to do his own home. Very good cooking and Peccoud delicious pies. In his free time I like to read. My favorite writer Paulo Coelho. I love to listen to good music.
If you describe my appearance, I - a young woman of average height, average build. Hair rusye, medium length. Eyes green. According to many I have quite a nice appearance.

It wish to be presented. My name is Valentina, a surname of Tjuleneva. To me of 35 years. I was born in Kazakhstan. In 1998 has moved to live to Orenburg. I married. My husband call Oleg. It works in the oil company. I have daughter Ekaterina. 15 years to study in it she in 9 class. Is engaged at musical school, likes to sing. I am engaged in business. I, have a small shop. My work very much to be pleasant to me, and the most important thing that at me not bad it turns out. This year I have arrived in the Orenburg State institute of management. I and my small family we love, to have a rest together. Basically we go on the Black Sea coast. I like to be engaged in the house. Very well I prepare also for a pitch вкуснейшие pies. At leisure I like to esteem. My favourite writer Paulo Koelo. I like to listen to good music. If to describe my appearance I am a young woman of average growth, an average constitution. Hair fair-haired, average length. Eyes - of green colour. According to many at me pleasant enough appearance

I would like to introduce myself. My name is Valentine, name Tyuleneva. I am 35 years old. I was born in Kazakhstan. In 1998, moved to live in Orenburg. I'm married. My husband's name is Oleg. He works in the oil company. I have a daughter, Catherine. She was 15 years old, learn it in grade 9. He is at a music school, loves to sing.
I am engaged in business. I have a small shop. My work is very nice, but most importantly, I have not bad at it. This year I entered the Orenburg State Institute of Management.
I and my small family love, have a rest together. Basically we are going to the Black Sea coast.
I like to do his own home. Very good cooking and Peccoud delicious pies. In his free time I like to read. My favorite writer Paulo Coelho. I love to listen to good music.
If you describe my appearance, I - a young woman of average height, average build. Hair rusye, medium length. Eyes green. According to many I have quite a nice appearance.