Нужно сочинение на английском языке " Плюсы и минусы телевидения"

Advantages and disadvantages of TV.
TV has good and bad sides. First of all it keeps people informed, we can learn a lot of information watching TV. We can choose programs that appeal to us more, because TV provides programs for all interests. Sometimes we can relax, entertain ourselves when we are tired. Advertisement on TV gives us information about different products and it makes easier to choose things to buy. When we watch TV we learn about the world, famous people and global or recent news.
But TV has a lot of disadvantages. It takes a lot of time and it makes us lazy. And it’s very harmful for our health, especially eyes. Some violent programs and films make people violent. Violence becomes a vital problem. There is too much advertisement on TV. Sometimes it can encourage us to buy things we don’t need at all. Watching TV takes most of free time of almost all people. We just watch it, we do not concentrate, and, finally, we waste time.
In my opinion people need something like informational center. As for me I watch TV about one hour a day. I watch it when I want to learn news or relax and entertain myself. People need TV, but it can’t be the main thing in their life. It’s interesting, but not the main thing in our life.
I don’t really know what we must do to make TV better. I think we can do nothing. We just should not sit hour by hour watching TV. I think we must watch only the most important and interesting things. Because if we see everything we’ll become mad.

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Television in Our Life
Television now plays an important role in our life. It is
difficult to say if it is good or bad for us. It is clear, that
television has advantages and disadvantages.
But are there more advantages than disadvantages? In the
first place, television is an entertainment. But it is not only a
convenient entertainment. For a family of three, four or five,
for example, it is more convenient and less expensive to sit
comfortably at home than to go out to find entertainment in
other places. They don't have to pay for expensive seats at the
theatre or cinema. They turn on the TV-set and can see
interesting films, concerts, football matches.
But some people think that it's bad to watch TV. Those
who watch TV need do nothing. We are passive when we
watch TV. Television shows us many interesting programmes.
But again there is a disadvantage here: we watch TV every
evening, and it begins to dominate our lives.
My friend told me that when his TV-set broke down, he
and his family found that they had more time to do things
and to talk to each other. There are other arguments for
and against television.
Very often the programmes are bad. Sometimes they show
too much violence in films and news programmes. There is
also too much pop music and ads. Ads on the whole are
convenient for grown-ups. But is it good for children to
watch all those ads where they show all kinds of underwear
and what not?

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