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My Family

Surname of our family is Smirnov. We live in Engels, Russia.

My father's name is Nikolay. He is forty years old. He works in a factory. His hobby is numismatics. He collects old coins. I think it is very interesting.

My mother is Jalia. She is thirty seven. She works as a school teacher. She is fond of embroidery. I think she is a gifted person.

I have neither brothers nor sisters. But I have a small cousin. Her name is Tanya. She is five years old. She goes to the kindergarden and learns to dance in a music school. She is a very hardworking girl.

My name is Sonya. I am fifteen years old. I am a first year student of the College of arts. Besides music, I like to read foreighn clasiic literature. My favourite authors are Gustave Flobert, Conan Doyly and Daniel Defoe.

My Family.
surname of family is Smirnovs. We are from Engels in Russia.
My Farther's name's Nikolay. He is forty years old. He works in a factory. His hobby is collecting. He collects old coins. I think it is very interesting.
My mother's name's Jalia. She is thirty seven. She works as a school teacher. She is fond of embroidery. I think, she has talent.
I have neither brothers nor sisters. But I have a small cousin. Her name's Tanya. She is five years old.
She goes to the kindergarden and learns to dance in a music school. She is very hardworking girl.
My name's Sonya. I'm fifteen years old. I'm a first year student of the College of arts. Besides music, I like to read a foreighn clasiic literature.
My favourite authors are Gustave Flobert, Conan Doyly and Daniel Defoe.
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