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Привет. 
Привет. 
Куда ты ездил этим летом отдыхать? 
этим летом я со своей семьей ездил отдыхать в Gorny Altai. 
В каких местах ты побывал там? 
Там мы ходили в поход на каракольские озера, и посетили телецкое озеро. 
Какая погода была там? 
погода была очень жаркая. 
чем ты там занимался? 
На алтае мы сплавлялись по горной реке катунь, посетили гэс, съездили на катере к водопадам, и летали на мотодельтаплане. 
С какими людьми т там познакомился? 
Я познакомился с интересными людьми из города новосибирска. 
Пока . 
Пока. 
 
Hi. 
Hi. 
Where you went this summer to have a rest? 
this summer I with the family went to have a rest in Gorny Altai. 
You have visited what places there? 
There we went hiking on karakolsky lakes, and have visited the teletsky lake. 
What weather was there? 
weather was very hot. 
than you there were engaged? 
On Altai we rafted on the mountain Katun River, have visited hydroelectric power station, have gone on a boat to falls, and flied on a motor-hang-glider. 
With what people of t there has got acquainted? 
I have got acquainted with interesting people from the city of Novosibirsk. 
Bye. 
Bye.

Малика Тициан · Accepted Answer

Hi. 
Hi. 
Where did you went this summer to have a rest? 
this summer my family and I went to have a rest in Gorny Altai. 
Have you visited what places there? 
We went there hiking on karakolsky lakes, and had visited the teletsky lake. 
What kind of weather was there? 
The weather was very hot. 
than where you very were engaged? 
On Altai we rafted on the mountain Katun River, than we visited hydroelectric power station, went on a boat to falls, and flew on a motor-hang-glider. 
With what people did you meet there? 
I have met with interesting people from the Novosibirsk city. 
Bye. 
 
Делай сам. С гугла не переводи. Гугл зло. Та за то что было можно ставить 2 
Bye.

Елена · Answer

Hi. 
Hi. 
Where did you go this summer for vacation? 
This summer my family and I went to the Gorny Altai. 
What places have you visited there? 
We went hiking on karakolsky lakes, and had visited the teletsky lake. 
What kind of weather was there? 
The weather was very hot. 
What else did you do there? 
On Altai we did water rafting on the mountain Katun River, then we visited hydroelectric power station, went on a boat to the water falls, and flew on a motor-hang-glider. 
 What people did you meet there? 
I have met some very interesting people from the Novosibirsk city. 
Bye. 
 
Саша Сашов: than =чем (сравнение) then=тогда