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I would like to talk about Leonardo da Vinci. He was an painter, scientist, sculptor, architect, writer, and of course the inventor. I gave it to him just for the fact that many of his inventions are still finding their way in the modern world. This glider, parachute, diving suit, a crossbow, combination lock, and more. Leonardo da Vinci was born April 15, 1452 in the village of Ankiano near the small town of Vinci, near Florence. Early Life of Leonardo spent with her mother. Then his father married a wealthy and noble girl, and took her son to her. Leonardo's father tried to attach to the family profession, but to no avail: the son was not interested in the laws of society. In 1466 Leonardo entered the studio of Verrocchio's apprentice artist. And in 1473 at age 20 Leonardo qualified as a master of the Guild of St. Luke. For much of his life, Leonardo was fascinated by the phenomenon of flight, producing many studies of the flight of birds, including his c. 1505 Codex on the Flight of Birds, as well as plans for several flying machines, including a light hang glider and a machine resembling a helicopter. According to the plan he had learned a metal edging and linen finish. The screw was set in motion by people who walked around and pushing the levers. At the time, the invention is not found use. Leonardo died in 1519.

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I would like to talk you about Leonardo da Vinci. He was an painter, scientist, sculptor, architect, writer, and of course the inventor. I gave it to him just for the fact that many of his inventions are still finding their way in the modern world. This glider, parachute, diving suit, a crossbow, combination lock, and more. Leonardo da Vinci was born April 15th, 1452 in the village of Ankiano. near the small town of da Vinci, near Florence. Tender age Leonardo spent with his mother. Then his father married with a wealthy and noble girl, and took her son to her. Leonardo's father tried to attach to the family profession, but it hasn't avail: the son was not interested in the laws of society. In 1466 Leonardo entered the studio of Verrocchio's apprentice artist. And in 1473 at age 20 Leonardo qualified, as a master of the Guild of St. Luke. For much of his life, Leonardo was fascinated by the phenomenon of flight, producing many studies of the flight of birds, including his c. 1505 Codex on the Flight of Birds, as well as plans for several flying machines, including a light hang glider and a machine resembling a helicopter. According to the plan he had learned a metal edging and linen finish. The screw was set in motion by people who walked around and pushing the levers. At the time, the invention is not found use. Leonardo died in 1519.