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My Plans for the Future
I have known for a long time that leaving school is the beginning of my independent life.It's not an easy task to make the right choice of a job.
I have many ideas of my future work. A couple of years ago I wanted to become a designer.I thought it was a very interesting profession. I was good at art and geometry in the school, but now I think about architect, because it is very cool if I can built a big building in centre of the city. it can leave my mark on history. This is impressive.
In conclusion I want to say that in all in the future I want get married and give birth to three children. I want big family with my love husband. I dream about perfect future.