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Дмитрий Ч

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Hello John.
Thank you for your invitation to me and my sister to stay with your family for the whole summer. We both can't wait for this event.
Can we come to you in the beginning of August?
I'm sure, you haven't met my sister, Kate, and it's hardly true you had seen her before. But I hope you'll like she, because she's very sociable person, easy find common ground each other. She's younger 3 years than me, studying to be an accountant.
Like me, she likes to play and watch a tennis. She is also in very good baseball. There is only thing, at least, Kate hate. A run. And it is wondering me because before, when we were children, we used to run every day in a village and she liked that.
I won't write you any more, because I'm very busy at the moment. It will be soon exams and I need hardly work to take it successfully.
I'll say the rest about my family in meeting.
Waiting for answer.

Roman
Roman

Hello John,

thank you for your invitation to me and my sister to stay with your family for the whole summer. We both hardly can wait for this event.
Can we come to you in the beginning of August?
I'm sure, you haven't met my sister, Kate, and I think, you had never
seen her before. But I hope you'll like her, because she's a very sociable person, so it can be easy to find common ground.
She's 3 years younger than me, she is studying to be an accountant.
The same as me, she likes to play and watch tennis. She is also very good in baseball. There is only one thing which Kate hates: running.
And it is strange for me because when we were children, we used to run every day in our village, and she really liked it.
I won't write you any more, because I'm very busy at the moment. I'll
have exams very soon and I need to work hardly to take them successfully.
I'll tell you the rest about my family when we meet.

Waiting for your answer,
Gennady

Анастасия
Анастасия

Dear John,
Thank you for your invintation for me and my sister to stay with you and your family for the whole summer. I hope everything is alright with you and your family.
Me and my sister both can't wait for this event.
Can we come to you in the beggining of August? I'm sure you haven't met my sister. But I hope you will like her, because she's very communicative person. It will be easy for you both to find common interestes.
She likes watching and playing tennis like me. Also, she is very good in basketball. The only thing that Kate hates is running. It makes me wonder, because when we were children, we were running every single day. It was in a village and she liked itt a lot.
I'm sorry, I'm very busy at the moment. Exams are coming and I need to work hard to pass them succesfully.
I'll tell you everything about my family when we will meet.
I'm looking forward for your answer, bye.
Best regards,
Gennadiy

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