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Anton V. Merkulov

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The family is the most important in human
life. Under the word "family" means parents and their children living
together. As it is good when mutual
understanding reigns in a family, warmth and geniality, but not always the
relations in a family develop thus as we would like it. The happy family is a
family in which all relationships are built on mutual trust and love. It seems
to me that the trust needs everyone. Unfortunately, families are different, as relations
with them. For example, someone constantly quarreling with each other, and
sometimes may even fight. And sometimes quite the opposite-all in the family
were completely indifferent to each other, are not interested in nor deeds, nor
interest, nor the problems, don't know who lives. There are a lot of jokes
about that. For example, on how the father picks up from kindergarten someone
else's child. It seems to me, in all of these stories have a share of sad
truth. Everyone dreams of a happy family. But it depends on us, on how we are
ready to put their effort into it. It's the personal relationship between
people of different generations, views and beliefs, who have to constantly deal
with domestic issues. Of course, there are also conflicts and disputes. But I
believe the most important thing is to respect each other. The main mistake
people make in relationships, in my opinion, is that they begin to take each
other for granted. They are no longer afraid to offend, make it hurt. With
strangers, we are always courteous, and you can guess who the House-who,
because it is yours! Native people-it is a gift of fate, that we should
appreciate. And family-our reliable shelter in the large, not always friendly.
And each of us must contribute to the happiness of his family.

Надя Чигринова
Надя Чигринова

нет, в первом же предложении - ошибка, нельзя сказать human life, как минимум нужен притяжательный глагол-связка, как максимум human-вид человеческой расы, а не людей в целом

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