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Марийка Lopatkina
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All treasures of the world beneath your feet
U`re the prettiest girl whom men is need
Your hair brilliance of the night
The cristal passion in your eyes
All treasures of the world beneath your feet
U`re the prettiest girl whom men is need
Your hair brilliance of the night
The cristal passion in your eyes
All treasures of the world ARE beneath your feet
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Your hair IS A brilliance of the night
The cristal passion IS in your eyes
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