Кто может перевести на английский язык - без переводчика?

Dear Julia,
Sorry I didn't answer your letter for such a long time. Last time you asked how I spent my summer holidays. It was awesome. I went to Turkey at the beginning of the summer. We stayed in the hotel with a beautiful view over the see. We used to go to the beach, to swim and take sun bathes every day, we also went water skiing. At the evenings we went to clubs. Also we had some excursions. It was really great, I got to know so many new things. I found some new friends while I was in Turkey. I came home having really good memories about it. Then I spent time in my home town. I saw friends, walked outside. I was very glad to see them again, we talked, we made fotos'. This day became the best of all this summer. While I had some free time I used to read books, watched tv. I spent really nice time. And now please tell me how you spend your holidays.
I'll be looking forward to get your answer.
Send my greetings to all your friends and parents.
Kisses,
Sveta.

Dear Julia
Sorry I didn't write for long.
In your last letter you asked me to tell about my summer vacation.
I spent the summer wonderfully.
In early summer my family and I travelled to Turkey.
We stayed at a hotel with a beautiful view on the sea.
Every day we went to the beach, swam in the sea, sunbathed and rode scooters.
In the evenings we visited night clubs.
Also we went on various excurtions.
They were very interesting, I got known many new things.
I met many new friends in Turkey.
I brought home a lot of pleasant memories.
Then I had holiday in my native town (city).
I met my friends, we walked a lot.
I was happy to communicate with them. We took many photos.
That day was the best day of the summer.
In my spare time I read books and watched TV.
All in all, I had a very good rest.
Now, tell me about your vacation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
My regards to all your fritends and your parents.
Love and kisses
Sveta

Dear Julia,
Sorry, I haven’t responded (for so) long.
In last letter you asked me how I had spent my summer (vocation).
It was wonderful.
At the beginning of summer I went to Turkey with my family.
We stayed at the hotel with the beautiful view on the sea.
Every day we went to the beach to swim, sunbathe, and ride the water bikes.
In the evenings we visited the clubs.
We also went on different excursions.
It was very interesting and I learnt a lot of new.
While being in Turkey I made a lot of friends.
I came back home with plenty of pleasant impression.
Then I went on to take a rest in my native town.
I was seeing my friends and going out.
I was glad to see them all. We talked and took photos.
It was the brightest day of that summer.
I would read books and watched TV.
In general, I had a very good time.
Could you tell me now how you have been doing?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards to all your friends and parents.
xxx Sveta

Dear Yulya.

к сожалению у меня тоже не совсем хорошо с английским

Kiss. Sveta.