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This summer was unforgettable for me. First weeks I spent with my friends. And later I succeeded to visit two wonderful resorts at once. In Gagre and Yalta! At the beginning of July I with my sister and friends left to Abhazia. There we spent unforgettable 10 days. Every day we lied on a beach, walked around a town, rode on an excursion. I made sure there, that Abhazia - is the country of the soul indeed! Arriving from Gagry, I several weeks stayed in foxes with my friends. And at the end of August we left together with parents in yaltu to the relatives. Yalta for me the second motherland, as there I spent greater part of the childhood. and it was very pleasantly to be dipped in this life again.These summer vacations I exactly will never forget . I saw very much interesting - the most beautiful nature of Abhazia and Crimea, magnificent architectural buildings, such as Swallow's nest, voroncovskiy palace... and at last my cherished dream to jump with a parachute was carried out!!! I will remember these vacations with a glad smile on face for so long.

думаю, так лучше будет..

It I conducted a summer it is unforgettable. I conducted a few first weeks of rest with the friends. And later I succeeded to visit at once on two wonderful resorts. In Gagre and Yalta! At the beginning of July I with the sister and friends left to Abhazia. There we conducted unforgettable 10 days. Every day weltered on a beach, walked around a town, rode on an excursion. I made sure there, that Abhazia - it the country of the soul indeed! Arriving from Gagry, I a few weeks stayed in foxes with the friends. And at the end of August together with parents left in yaltu to the relatives. Yalta for me the second motherland, as there I conducted greater part of the childhood. and it was very pleasantly to be dipped in this life again.These summer vacations I exactly will forget never. I saw very much interesting - the most beautiful nature of Abhazia and Crimea, magnificent architectural buildings, such as Swallow's nest, voroncovskiy palace... and at last my cherished dream to jump with a parachute was carried out!!! I will be yet very long to remember these vacations with a glad smile on face.