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Ребята, проверьте пожалуйста рассказ о себе на английском, писал сам - могут быть ошибки, посоветуйте что исправить.

I would like to tell about myself.
My name is Андрей.
I was born on the eleventh february. I am thirteen years
and i am from Орёл. I live with parents and little brather in a big house. We try to spend every weekend together in nature. I love and respect my family and help them in my free time. From pets I have fish in the aquarium, i like to look after them. Watching the fish, I calm down, this is very important in today's rhythm of life! As for my character, I purposeful, responsive, attentive, self-confident, Have a good sense of humor. My favourite school subjects are computer sciences, mathematics and physical Culture. When I grow up, I want to work for my mom's company. I also take an active part in sports I am very ambitious and will try with all my might and main to make a successful career.
Поменяй "Андрей" на "Andrew"
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Вадим Москальчук
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Вадим Москальчук Произносится как "Эндрю"
Максим ****** Орёл поменяй нвюа Орел
It is not bad :)
I would like to tell about myself.
My name is Андрей.
I was born on the eleventh OF February. I am thirteen years OLD
and I am from Оryol. I live with parents and MY little brOther in a big house. We try to spend every weekend together OUTSIDE. I love and respect my family and help them in my free time. I have fish in the aquarium, I like to FEED them. Watching the fish, I calm down, it's RELAXING, it is very important in today's rhythm of life! As for my character, I AM purposeful, responsible, attentive, self-confident, I have a good sense of humor. My favourite school subjects are computer sciences, mathematics and physical EDUCATION. When I grow up, I WILL work for my mom's company. I GO ON FOR sports, I am very ambitious and I will try with all my might to make a successful career.
I would like to tell you about me.
Молодец, хороший текст!
кое где ошибки, но не критично. Brother например а не Brather
Галина Х
Галина Х
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weekend together in nature - weekend together outside.
from pets-as pets i have fishes .
Watching the fish, I calm down- i become calm while i’m looking on fish, swimming in water.
As for my character-as for my personality
physical Culture-physical education
Галина Х но у Андрюхи Петрова такой самобытный русский Английский, также понятней что он хотел сказать "из животных у меня рыбы")
Поменяй все что на английском на русский
Оля Карпенко
Оля Карпенко
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