Нужно немного подправить письмо:
1.End letter properly.
2.Organise paragraphs better.
3.Заменить "in the same shoes" и "Like totally impossible"!
Hi /имя друга/,
I'm writing you back as soon as I've got your letter!
It turns out we are in the same shoes with our projects, aren't we?)
I have been doing a really huge project about Egyptian pyramids. Let me tell you about it.
I've got some exciting news for you. There are from 118 to138 pyramids in Egypt left. I've never realized there are so many of them! That's completely amazing.
The most interesting part of my project is the design of the pyramids itself tho.
What really made impression on me was that the Egyptians had built pyramids without any complicated machines, using primitive tools only.
Just imagine, one of the ways of processing stone walls was grinding. I find Egyptian grinding totally incredible. Not a blade of a knife could came in through the brick walls. Like totally impossible!
I came up with the demonstration the quality of that grinding in front of the history class. So I made a mini-copy of a pyramid wall. You should have seen the face of my teacher, while I was showing how it worked. And I couldn't believe it when I got A+ after all.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
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Домашние задания: Иностранные языки
Помогите пожалуйста с английским
Hi /имя друга/,
I'm writing you back as soon as I've got your letter!
It turns out we are both doing really exciting history projects, aren't we?)
I have been running a really huge project about Egyptian pyramids. Let me tell you about it.
Do you know the first thing I found out? There are from 118 to138 pyramids in Egypt left. I've never realized there are so many of them! That's completely amazing.
However the most interesting part of my project is the design of the pyramids itself tho.
What really made impression on me was that the Egyptians had built pyramids without any complicated machines, using primitive tools only.
Besides they used grinding to process stone walls. I find Egyptian grinding totally incredible. Not a blade of a knife could came in through the brick walls.
I came up with the demonstration the quality of that grinding in front of the history class. I made a mini-copy of a pyramid wall. You should have seen the face of my teacher, while I was showing how it worked. And I couldn't believe it when I got A+ after all.
So, how is your project going? Have you finished it? What grade did you get, if so?
Well, I’d better go now as I have promised my younger sister I would go outside and play with her.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
ваше имя
I'm writing you back as soon as I've got your letter!
It turns out we are both doing really exciting history projects, aren't we?)
I have been running a really huge project about Egyptian pyramids. Let me tell you about it.
Do you know the first thing I found out? There are from 118 to138 pyramids in Egypt left. I've never realized there are so many of them! That's completely amazing.
However the most interesting part of my project is the design of the pyramids itself tho.
What really made impression on me was that the Egyptians had built pyramids without any complicated machines, using primitive tools only.
Besides they used grinding to process stone walls. I find Egyptian grinding totally incredible. Not a blade of a knife could came in through the brick walls.
I came up with the demonstration the quality of that grinding in front of the history class. I made a mini-copy of a pyramid wall. You should have seen the face of my teacher, while I was showing how it worked. And I couldn't believe it when I got A+ after all.
So, how is your project going? Have you finished it? What grade did you get, if so?
Well, I’d better go now as I have promised my younger sister I would go outside and play with her.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
ваше имя
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Hi /имя друга/,
I hope this letter finds you well. Thank you for your letter, it was great to hear from you. It seems like we are both working on exciting projects at the moment.
I've been working on a project about Egyptian pyramids, and I wanted to share some of the interesting things I've learned with you. Did you know that there are between 118 and 138 pyramids still standing in Egypt? I was amazed when I found out.
The most fascinating aspect of my project, however, is the design of the pyramids themselves. The Egyptians built these incredible structures using only primitive tools and without the use of any complicated machines. It's truly incredible to think about how they achieved this feat.
One thing that particularly impressed me was the way the Egyptians processed the stone walls. Instead of using knives or other sharp tools, they used a method called grinding. It's hard to believe, but not even a blade of a knife could penetrate the brick walls. It's truly remarkable.
To demonstrate the quality of this grinding technique to my history class, I made a mini-copy of a pyramid wall. My teacher was amazed at how it worked, and I was thrilled to receive an A+ for my presentation.
Anyway, I just wanted to update you on my project and catch up. I hope everything is going well for you, and please keep in touch.
Best regards,
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Hi /имя друга/,
I hope this letter finds you well. Thank you for your letter, it was great to hear from you. It seems like we are both working on exciting projects at the moment.
I've been working on a project about Egyptian pyramids, and I wanted to share some of the interesting things I've learned with you. Did you know that there are between 118 and 138 pyramids still standing in Egypt? I was amazed when I found out.
The most fascinating aspect of my project, however, is the design of the pyramids themselves. The Egyptians built these incredible structures using only primitive tools and without the use of any complicated machines. It's truly incredible to think about how they achieved this feat.
One thing that particularly impressed me was the way the Egyptians processed the stone walls. Instead of using knives or other sharp tools, they used a method called grinding. It's hard to believe, but not even a blade of a knife could penetrate the brick walls. It's truly remarkable.
To demonstrate the quality of this grinding technique to my history class, I made a mini-copy of a pyramid wall. My teacher was amazed at how it worked, and I was thrilled to receive an A+ for my presentation.
Anyway, I just wanted to update you on my project and catch up. I hope everything is going well for you, and please keep in touch.
Best regards,
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So, how is your project going? Have you finished it? What grade did you get, if so?
Well, I’d better go now as I have promised my younger sister I would go outside and play with her.
Keep in touch!
Yours,
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