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I think you need to unlearn this habit. The Internet is not bad, but too much spending time you forget real life. To overcome shyness you need more is in the company of guys, and there itself everything will work out. If I were you I would try not to complicate your life. I don't think you need to go to a psychologist. These problems can be easily overcome by yourself. Well, if this continues very long, then Yes, it is. Maybe you should talk to your parents or close friends? What do you think about guys in General? In addition to these issues, health is all right?
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Я думаю что тебе надо отучиться от этой привычки. В интернете нет ничего плохого, но слишком много проводя там времени ты забываешь реальную жизнь. Чтобы преодолеть застенчивость нужно больше находится в обществе парней, а там само все наладится. Если бы я был тобой то попробовал бы не усложнять себе жизнь. Я не думаю что тебе надо идти к психологу. С этими проблемами можно легко справиться самому. Ну если так будет продолжаться очень долго, то да, стоит. Может тебе поговорить с родителями или близкими друзьями? Что ты думаешь о парнях в целом? Кроме этих проблем, со здоровьем все нормально?
I think you should give up this habit. There is nothing wrong with the Internet, but spending too much time on it you are missing your real life. To get over / overcome your shyness, you should communicate more with guys, and it will all work itself out. If I were you I wouldnʹt complicate my life. I don't think you need to go to a psychologist. You can easily solve this type of problem by yourself. But if it goes on like this for a long time, you certainly should consult a specialist. Donʹt you think you need to talk to your parents or close friends? What do you think about guys in general?Have you got any other problems except these ones? What about your health? Do you feel well?
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I think you should break off this habit. The Internet is not bad, but, spending too much time there, you forget the real life. To overcome shyness, you need to spend more time among the boys, and then, gradually, the things will straighten out. If I were you, I would try not to complicate my life. I don’t think you need to go to a psychologist. You can easily overcome these problems by your own. But if this continues for too long, then yes, you will have to. Maybe you should talk to your parents or close friends? What do you think about the boys in general? Do you have any other problems, except these ones? Any health issues?

Заменила guys на boys - т. к. первое может относиться не только к парням, но и девушкам.
- But you should forget your real life, spending a lot of time surfing the net
- But you should forget your real life, if you spend too much time surfing the net
- To overcome shyness, you need to be in the company with guys and everything will be okay
- Is everything all right with your health?