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Mum: Good morning, dear. Good morning. What's the matter? --Mum greeted Mark and asked what the matter was.

Mark: Dad says that he's lost his voice.- -Mark answered Dad had lost his voice.

Mum: He has lost his voice! He can't. It must be a joke. Come on, dear. Don't joke.--Mum wondered to hear that and added it must be a joke.She asked Mark not to joke.
Mark: He says it isn't a joke. He has relly lost his voice. --Mark replied it wasn't a joke and added he had really lost his voice.

Mum: I'll make a nice cup of tea.You’ll soon get your voice back.--Mum suggested making a nice cup of tea and promised it would get back his voice soon.
Susan: How did you lose your voice, Dad? --Susan wanted to know how Dad had lost his voice.

Mark: He says he went to the football match last night. --Mark said he had gone to the match the previous night.

Susan: And you shouted so much you lost your voice. --Susan said he had shouted so much and had lost his voice.

Mark: Yes, he shouted so much he lost his voice. --Mark agreed.

Susan: Did you win? --Susan wanted to know if they had won.

Mark: No, they, lost. --Mark answered they had lost.
Mum: Here is a nice cup of tea. Would you like something to eat? --Mum suggested a cup of tea and asked if they would like something to eat.

Mark: He says he would like some toast with honey.--Mark answered he wanted some toast with honey.
Susan: Why honey,Mam?-- Susan wanted to know why the toast must be with honey
Mum: Because honey is good for your throat.--Mum answered honey was good for his throat.

Mum said Good morning, dear, good morning and what the matter was.

Mark said that dad had said that he had lost his voice.

Mum asked if he had lost his voice was the truth. And that he could not. And that it ought to be a joke. And she asked dear Mark to come on and don't joke.
Mark responded that dad said that it wasn't a joke and that dad had really lost his voice.

Mum said that she would make a nice cup of tea and that he would soon get his voice back.
Susan asked how dad did lose his voice.

Mark said that dad had said that he had gone to the football match the night before.

Susan said that he had shouted so much he lost your voice.

Mark said Yes and that dad had shouted so much he lost his voice.

Susan asked if they had won?

Mark responded No and that had lost.
Mum said that there was a nice cup of tea and asked if they would like something to eat.

Mark said that dad said that he would like some toast with honey.
Susan asked mom Why honey.
Mum explained that honey is good for her throat.