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1.It HAS begun when I was just 17
It's not a thing ( THAT EVERY MAN DREAMED (ABOUT)?)dreamed by every man
But these lines are not the main.
I'm just a human, I'm just a teen
No one is thinking, that I got in....

Chorus: The scary story (the scary story)
The crazy story (the crazy story)
Where I all the time say «Why»
But it's not a life which should be mine

2.I didn't think about the troubles I got in
But my friends could get me out of them
Give me please a microphone, mam
I wanna dance, I wanna sing
No one is thinking, that I got in...

Chorus.

People stand up (people stand up)
All the hands up (all the hands up)
No one can see (no one can see)
That (THIS (THAT) HAS ended for me...

Chorus.
Chorus.
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1.It began when I was just 17
It's not a thing dreamed by every man
But these lines are not the point.
I'm just a human, I'm just a teen
No one knows what I have within

Chorus: The scary story (the scary story)
The crazy story (the crazy story)
Where I say "Why?" all the time
But it's not the life that should be mine

2.I didn't think about the troubles I got in
But my friends could get me out of them
Give me please a microphone, mam
I wanna dance, I wanna sing
No one knows what I have within

People stand up (people stand up)
Put your hands up (put your hands up)
No one can see (no one can see)
It's all over for me (так вроде получше)

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