Помогите с английским! Я всё задание сделала, осталось проверить! Правильно ли я написала?

I get up at 7 o'clock and wash in the bathroom. Later my family gets up and we have breakfast all together.
We always go out to theatre, cinema, park, museum in the afternoons. I like to go to the cinema. My family always eats My father drinks coffee, and I do homework with my mother. In the evening all of us have supper. At ten o'clock we clean teeth, and go to bed

девушка, простите, вам сколько лет?
я надеюсь, вы егэ не сдаете?

Увы, неправильно. Ничего, сейчас переделаем.

I usually get up at 7 o'clock. Then I have a shower in the bathroom and dress for breakfast. When my family gets up a bit later, we have breakfast together.
On our days off we often go to the cinema, theatre or a museum. We also like walking in the park.
I like going to the cinema most of all. We always have some popcorn and cola there. After the cinema we sometimes go shopping or play different games.
At 6 o'clock we usually come home. My father has a cup of coffee and I do my homework with my mother.
In the evening we have supper. At 10 o'clock we clean our teeth, kiss each other and go to bed.

Вы молодец, что старались. Я не только исправила ошибки, но и немного подредактировала Ваш рассказ, чтобы он лучше звучал. Удачи Вам!