Правильно ли написано письмо на английском?

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Правильно ли написано письмо на английском?

How are you doing?
Long time I did not receive any letter from you. What about your parents?

Is they are ok Did they go to the Moscow for holidays As I remember you was telling to me, that they wish to have trip to the capital city of Russia.

Ok,now something about myself.

I little tired,just back home from the school. Now is already 4 o clock But I didn’t have anything to eat.

So,now I am writing the letter to you and waiting for the dinner(will be more correct to say breakfast,lunch and dinner).I waiting for the pizza ))))).This is only chance to write you the letter and little beat enjoy the life without doing anything))))).

Today for me was quite difficult day .I get up at 6 o clock morning. After that immediately jump to the street with my dog (for some his private business).At 7 o clock I was going to my school( as you know I have to spend for the road more than one our).So,even I sat to the bus at 7.10 I was not able to be at time in my school. An unfortunately today is examination day for the first semester. I was late,but our teacher is very nice lady and she allowed me to come in.

After the examination I went to the library .I get there some books which helps me to be prepared for the next exams……

Oh, my pizza is coming. So, now I am writing the letter and enjoy my pizza. But after that I think I should go for some exercise. Otherwise after 2 month, at the time when (encoding to my schedule)I am going to meet you. You will see big balloon with the name Albina.

Ok my dear, I have to go.

Best regards to your parents. Wish them good health.

Bye.

Yours Albina.

Ольга Васильковская

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12.12.2008

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Answer 1 · 2008-12-12 05:59:40

How are you?
I have not received any letter from you for a long time. What about your parents?

Are they are ok? Did they go to Moscow for holidays? As I remember you told to me that they wish to have trip to the capital of Russia.

Ok, now there's something about myself.

I am little tired, just back home from school. Now it is already 4 o'clock/ But I don't have anything to eat.

So, now I am writing the letter to you and waiting for dinner (it's more correct for me to say breakfast,lunch and dinner). I am waiting for pizza ))))). This is the only chance to write you the letter and little bitt enjoy the life without doing anything))))).

Today it was quite difficult day for me. I got up at 6 o clock in the morning. After that immediately jumped to the street with my dog (for some his private business). At 7 o' clock I was going to my school ( as you know I have to spend for my way more than one hour). So,even I have taken the bus at 7.10 I was not able to be at time in my school. Unfortunately today is the examination day for the first term. I was late,but our teacher is a very nice lady and allowed me to come in.

After the exam I went to the library. I got there some books which will help me to be prepared for the next exams……

Oh, my pizza is coming. So, now I am writing the letter and enjoy my pizza. But after that I think I'll go for some exercises. Otherwise after 2 months, at the time when (due to my shedule) I am going to meet you. You will see a big balloon with the name Albina.

Ok my dear, I have to go.

Best regards to your parents. Wish them good health.

Bye.

Yours Albina.

Андрей Сидоров

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Answer 2 · 2008-12-12 06:00:05

Абсолютно неправильно. Читабельно, но много ошибок. Например :
Не употребляют "How are you doing?" - How are you? Все! Без "doing"
Вы можете спросить "What are you doing?" если человек находится в данный момент где-то рядом с вами и может слышать вас.
Is they are ok ...нужно Are they OK?
Did they go to the Moscow for holidays - Did they been to (перед названием городов артикль не ставится) Moscow for Holidays.
И т. д.
Занимайтесь еще. . Или пользуйтесь этой программой. http://www.whitesmoke.com/landing_flash/grammar_rus.html?d=9&a=5&r=21&fvar=GA_WW_content_RU_EnglishChecker_Ad12&gclid=CJqp-aaPtJYCFQNbxwod5k02Lw

Алексей Плеханов

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