Ин. яз. Есть ли ошибки?

In nature не звучит по-английски. Может лучше сказать outside?

Photographs will be a good memory может лучше photographs will be a good reminder?

Не понятно от какого лица написано произведение. В первом предложении от первого лица, - Я хочу заняться фотографией. А потом дважды You can, вместо I can или I could. And THE ordinary days. New and new- тавтология. Может лучше new and newer? Или new and more advanced?
Почему colorful (амер)? Colourful eng?

I’d like to take up photography. This is a hobby that brings peace, helps to relax and gives good memories later thanks to photo-maps. You can take photos practically anywhere - outdoors, on the backyard or even in your apartment. You can also make a snapshot of anything - landscapes, flowers, animals or people. Photographs are a good memory of important events, or the ordinary days of your life. Cameras came into the life of modern man relatively recently, all in all in the last century. Before the invention of the first apparatus of phototechnics, it was possible to transfer the moment exclusively by means of a picture or a drawing. But technological progress gives us new and new inventions that make our life easier, brighter and more colorful.

Нет, нету