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I have lead this summer unforgettably. Some weeks of rest I have lead the first with the friends. And later I managed to visit at once on two wonderful resorts. In Гагре and Yalta! In the beginning of July I with the sister and girlfriends have gone to Abkhazia. There we have lead unforgettable 10 days. Every day rolled on a beach, walked on city, went by excursion. There I was convinced, that Abkhazia is really country of soul! Having arrived from Gagry, I some weeks have stayed in лисках with the friends. And in the end of August together with parents has left in ялту to the relatives. Yalta for me the second native land as there I have lead the most part of the childhood. Also it was very pleasant to plunge into this life again. I precisely shall not forget these summer vacations never. I have seen a lot of interesting - the most beautiful nature of Abkhazia and Crimea, magnificent architectural constructions, such as Ласточкино a jack, воронцовский a palace... And at last my treasured dream to jump with a parachute was carried out!!! I still shall recollect very long this vacation with a joyful smile on the person.

This summer I spent unforgettable. first few weeks of vacation I spent with my friends. And later I was able to go at two wonderful resorts. In Gagra and Yalta! In early July, I was with my sister and her girlfriends went to Abkhazia. We spent an unforgettable 10 days. Every day, lying on the beach, stroll through the city, went on trips. There I found that Abkhazia - it is really a country soul!
Originally from Gagra, I spent several weeks in Liska with his friends. And in late August, along with his parents went to Yalta to their relatives. Yalta my second homeland, since I spent most of his childhood. and was very pleased to plunge into this life again.
This summer vacation I do not ever forget. I saw a lot of interesting things - beautiful nature of Abkhazia and the Crimea, magnificent architecture, such as the Swallow's Nest, Vorontsov Palace ...and finally realized my dream to jump with a parachute! I will be a very long time to remember these holidays with a joyful smile on his face.

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