пожалуйста исправьте ошибки в тексте на английском. если не сложно

Уже было!!!!
Еще одна ошибка (недочет) в предложении he becomes a strict. Так не говорят. Надо либо he becomes VERY strict. или he becomes a strict person (ну или так угодно тут можно, чтоб ВЫРАЗИТЬ СВОЮ МЫСЛЬ, может вам больше нравится SHITHEAD)

My father's name is Alexander. He was born in the village Tsarev. This village was in the past the capital of the Golden Horde, that is, the Tatar-Mongol invasion in the distant past.
Now my father is 55 years old. My dad is an artistic director. He works at a club.
In the childhood, he was a talented boy. He played several musical instruments: accordion, guitar, synthesizer. When he finished the school, he entered the cultural and educational College and after four years of study he was qualified as an artistic director. In 1993 my parents got married. My dad likes cooking, he prepares delicious dishes. He likes reading when he has free time. My dad is very hardworking (has "Golden
Hands"). He loves his car even more than his wife (my mother). When he doesn't like something, he becomes somewhat strict. But he never punishes us physically. My dad can give advice and put everyone to the right way. I am sure, my father is the best.