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My School Holidays
Day One: I had a very good day. Finally I slept after school. I woke up at 10:00. I washed up and went to breakfast. I ate eggs and drank tea. After that I started to watch the news on the Internet. Suddenly, I received a texted from my friend. He invited me to walk. We met at 14:00. We walked in the park and in the city center. It was fun. Since it was summer, I came home at 22:14 and went to bed at 24:00.

Day Two: I woke up at 11:00. Mom just had breakfast. I ate cereal with milk and drinking orange juice. It was delicious. As usual, I began to surf the Internet. Then the phone rang. It was Sasha. He called me to the cinema. I agreed. I looked forward to this meeting. We left the house at 17:00. The movie started at 18:00. These were the Pirates of the Caribbean. This is a very interesting film. I advise all to see. I came home very late. When I got home, I quickly had dinner and went to bed.

Day Three: I woke up at 10:30. There was very heavy rain. I had breakfast and went to read a book. After that, I come round to my best friend. We played in a computer. It was fun. At 16:47 the rain has ended and we went for a walk. We walked in the park and ride on a swing. After that we went back home. I have dined. I ate the chicken and potatoes and drinking tea. It was delicious. After that, I started watching a movie and suddenly fell asleep.