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Dear Helen
I had a great time on holiday. In July my family and I 
were near Snowdow. We were walking up the mountains from morning till 
lunch. It was not easy, but it was exciting! Last week we went 
sightseeing to York. We went to an old castle. They say there are ghosts
 in the castle but we did not see any. My friend had been there before, 
and she had not seen them either. In August the weather was fine. I went
 sunbathin and swam a lot! I took many fantastic photos. I will send you
 some. I am looking forward to seeing you again, Mandy

Анна Милова · Accepted Answer

Dear Helen,
she had a great time on holiday. In July her family and her were near Snowdow. They were walking up the mountains from morning till lunch. It was not easy, but it was exciting! Last week they went sightseeing to York. They went to an old castle. They say there are ghosts in the castle but they did not see any. Her friend had been there before, and she had not seen them either. In August the weather was fine. She went sunbathin and swam a lot! She took many fantastic photos. She will send you some. She is looking forward to seeing you again 
Mandy