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Today, many countries have laws that restrict or prohibit smoking in some or all public places. tobacco smoke causes serious diseases in smokers. Everyone knows that smoking is bad for health. But still many people smoke. I believe that they harm not only their health but also the health of those around them.
Firstly, I think smoking should be banned, because it affects people who do not smoke. Increase the percentage of lung cancer diseases, hence increases mortality. Secondly, the population was healthy and improved life expectancy. Not a little, it is important that all affect the gene pool of the population. Parents must not only think about their health, but also about the health of their future children.
Today, many countries have laws that restrict or prohibit smoking in some or all public places. tobacco smoke causes serious diseases in smokers. Everyone knows that smoking is bad for health. But still many people smoke. I believe that they harm not only their health but also the health of those around them.
Firstly, I think smoking should be banned, because it affects people who do not smoke. Increase the percentage of lung cancer diseases, hence increases mortality. Secondly, the population was healthy and improved life expectancy. Not a little, it is important that all affect the gene pool of the population. Parents must not only think about their health, but also about the health of their future children.