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On week days I usually get up nearly 7 o'clock.I do body exercises, I wash, put on and I make a breakfast. I leave the house at 8 o'clock. At office I at 9 o'clock. I very much like my work, there I communicate with the колекгами. We always help each other. I work 8 hours. With 13:00 till 14:00 At me a lunch break. At this time I have dinner in cafe. The working day comes to an end at 17:00 o'clock. I am met by my husband from work and we together take away our daughter from kindergarten. At 18 o'clock we have supper. After a dinner I spend time about the family. Usually we go for a walk in park. 
I go to bed at 23:00 o'clock.

Юлия Кравцова · Accepted Answer

...with the колекгами...)))

Анна Студеникина · Answer

On week days I usually get up at about 7 o'clock. I do some physical exercise, have a wash, get dressed, have breakfast. I leave the house at 8 and come to my office by 9 o'clock. I like my job very much because I can socialize with my colleagues. We always help each other. I work for 8 hours a day. My lunch break is from 13:00 till 14:00 when I go to a cafe. The working day comes to an end at 5 pm. I am met by my husband and then we take our daughter from kindergarten. At 6 pm we have our supper and then I spend time with my family. We usually go for a walk in the park. 
I go to bed at 11 pm.