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I usually get up at 6.30 o'clock morning. I makes charging, wash face, clean her teeth and comb her hair. Then I make breakfast for the whole family. My kids get up at 7 o'clock. They are go to wash the face and to get dressed . My son goes to kindergarten. My daughter goes to school. We are leaves the House at 8.00 . Then I go home to do housework and cook dinner. When I rest, I like to listen to music or watch TV. My daughter comes home at 2.0 . We have dinner at 2.30 . Then we go on dance classes. Sometimes I and mine children stroll by down street. Sometimes we read books or watch cartoons by tv. When mine husband comes with work, the whole family is going to have dinner. We goes to bed at 9.30 .

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Наталья · Answer

I usually get up at 6.30. I make my morning exercises, wash face, clean my teeth and comb my hair. Then I make breakfast for the whole 
family. My children get up at 7 o'clock. They wash their faces and 
 get dressed (dress themselves) . My son goes to kindergarten. My daughter goes to school. 
We leave home at 8 o'clock . Then I go home to do housework and 
cook dinner. When I (have a rest) rest, I like to listen to the music or watch TV. My 
daughter comes home at 2 o'clock . We have dinner at 2.30. Then we go to
dance classes. Sometimes I and my children stroll down the street. 
Sometimes we read books or watch cartoons on tv. When my husband 
comes from work, we have dinner. We go to 
bed at 9.30. Где-то так. Грамматику, предлоги, местоимения исправил.