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i'm gonna tell you about myself. i'm quite a very cheerful person .my big love is shopping. i very much love to go shopping with my friends. besides i'm very sociable in fact sociable is one of main strengths . .i enjoy socializing. i wouldn't say i'm noisy, but not quit. i love having fun with friends. my friends say that it is easy to get along with me. i have a lot of interests outside school. i love to drawing and swimming. like everyone else i have weaknesses too. i'm a bit too bossy.

Ярослав Данилюк · Accepted Answer

I want to tell you about myself. I'm quite a very cheerful person. I like shopping very much and I like do it with my friends. Besides I'm very sociable, it's one of my main strengths. I enjoy communication. I can't say i'm noisy, but I'm not quit. I like having fun with friends. My friends say that it is easy to get along with me. I have a lot of interests outside school. I like drawing and swimming. I have weaknesses like everyone else . I'm a little bit too bossy.

Дмитрий Костюченко · Answer

Я не очень в английском, но кое что на мой взгляд можно изменить. 
love везде заменить на like 
outside school - я бы убрал 
 i very much love to go shopping with my friends -> i like to go shopping with my friends very much 
i'm quite and very cheerful person - мне кажется так правильнее.