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I love convenient things. I like any colors in clothes, main that this thing suited me and well looked. On walk with friends I prefer to dress jeans, a hoodie and sneakers. In this dress I feel freely and comfortably. For a campaign at cinema and a dinner in cafe I put on more strictly. My style - Casual. More often I buy clothes in firm shops. I don't pursue a fashion, and I carry that to me really all right!

Ольга Булатова · Accepted Answer

I LIKE convenient clothes. 
 I like any color in clothes, the main point is that the thing fits me and looks good. For a walk with friends I prefer to wear jeans, a hoodie and sneakers. 
In this outfit I feel free and comfortable. 
 For a going to the cinema or a dinner in cafe I dress more strict. My style is Casual. More often I buy clothes in brand shops. I don't follow fashion and trends, and I wear really all right!

Ирина · Answer

I like clothes of all colors as long as the thing suits me and is well-looking. When going for a walk with my friends 
 I prefer to wear jeans a hoodie and sneakers. In such dress I feel free and comfortable. For a campaign to cinema or a dinner in cafe I dress more strictly. Casual is my style here. Most often I buy clothes in brand-name shops. I don't follow the fashion trends, and carry what is convenient to me to wear.