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At me in a family everything is good. We understand and we hang together. When the help is necessary to me, parents help me. We very much like to spend time together: to go to have a rest on the small river, to arrange picnics etc. With my sister we always go to visit the grandmother. My family is my treasure!

Татьяна Санникова · Accepted Answer

Everything is good for me in my family . We understand and support each other. Parents always help me when it is necessary. We like to spend time together very much: we go to have a rest on the bank of the small river, have picnics etc. My sister and I always visit our grandmother. My family is my treasure!