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We live in civilized world where nature dominates over people. Mankind feel that they must take care of nature due to living in this environment. 
 Thus, in order to keep our planet safe people have designed the animal right. It consists of many articles telling how human must relate to animal and beasts. One of basic articles says to us that strict animal abuse giving rise to blood drip is an arrestable offence. 
 In conclusion, such animal rights are quite important as they keep naturalness of the world.

Наталья Зверева · Accepted Answer

We live in the civilized world where nature dominates over people. Mankind feels that it has to take care of nature due to living in this environment. 
 Thus, in order to keep our planet safe people have designed the animal right. It consists of many articles telling how human must behave to animals and beasts. One of the basic articles says that strict animal abuse causing blood drip is an arrestable offence. 
 In conclusion, such animal rights are quite important as they keep naturalness of the world.