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If five years ago I was asked what do I think about the city of in future, then certainly I would say that in this city, instead of buses, trams and trolley buses a modern, very sophisticated spaceships carry all passengers in no time. Factories, plants, mills are fully automated and run by computers.
The children in this town have no worries, the best toys, rides, and computer games are available for them.
But years pass, we get older and realize that children's dreams are just fantasy.
The city of my dreams is a modern metropolis with lovely, neat, and comfortable houses in which there are always heat and electricity, in which there are no water and sewer breaks, no fetid rivers and lakes. There are working elevators, and entrances are like showrooms.
In the city of my dreams there are rustle trees, enjoying the touch of fresh air, fragrant flowers, green lawns, splashing fountains create a sense of presence on the promenade of the seaside city.
The streets of the city of my dreams are clean, and have a glittering surface, and on the sidewalks women walk wearing high heel dress shoes, and there is no man wearing heavy boots, fearing to enter into another puddle of viscous mud. Cars are not aware of permanent repairs, not because there is no money to implement them, but because the roads are in excellent condition: no dents, no cracks, no dirt, like a glue, and also because each car is charged with an environmentally friendly fuel.
In the city of my dreams, life is calm and measured. Fathers and mothers are not afraid to let their children walk on the street, playing with friends, because they know that no criminal would encroach on their lives and health of their child. Everyone is under police guard, who stands guard over the rights of every citizen.
In the city of my dreams young people know that they have to work to help to pay tuition and life expenses. Young people get access to many earthly delight: a visit to the theater, cinema, concerts and shows. They feel that city needs them, hoping for their energy and ability.
In the city of my dreams people can work well. They have a clear mind, glowing with joy and confidence. They can help anyone and everyone. They lead a healthy lifestyle: no more such diseases as drug addiction and alcoholism. They know the traditions and customs of his native city, and pass on their experiences to their children.
In the city of my dreams ...Tell me that all this may be only in dreams, but this is a city of my dreams. I hope that my dreams can come true reality. It should make an effort not to deviate from the chosen course, and the miracle happens!

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