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Last Friday the main hall of our school housed the annual Spring Festival. Held on the last Friday of March, this annual show didn't disappoint in 2019.

The audience could appreciate and enjoy what school clubs had prepared for the performance. The school band played the Spring Sonata and then accompanied the choir as they performed the April Aspirations, a song cycle that centres on seeing spring in. The school ballet club concluded the performance with March to May dances.

There were classmates, parents, friends and family in the audience. The teachers also watched. All in all, the show was a great success, and the performers were given a standing ovation at the end of the show. I myself clapped as hard as I could. I personally liked the April Aspirations most of all. At one point it brought tears of joy to my eyes.

Looking back, I can say it's been one of the best Spring Festivals this far. However, as they say there's always room for improvement, so I'd like to point out a couple of things to make the show even better. First of all, I would introduce an interval so that the audience could rest a little. The performance is always moving and intense, and it can be too much at times. Secondly, I'd like to see more collaboration between the clubs. After all they meet and rehearse in the same school building. It's only natural that the clubs should work on a joint production one day. It can be a musical for example.