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Dear Helen,
last Sunday we went to the cinema because we wanted to see a new film. The weather was good and we decided to go for a walk. We were crossing a road when I saw Jessica. She was standing near the shop. She said she was waiting for her friend who had come to our town a day before and wanted to see the film too. The name of Jessica's friend was also Helen! She appeared to be a nice girl and we went to the cinema all together. Jessica asked me if I had already seen the film.

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Dear Helen!
last Sunday we went to the cinema because we wanted to see a new film. The weather was good and we decided to go for a walk. We were crossing a road when I saw Jessica. She was standing near the shop. She said she was waiting for her friend who had come to our town a day before and wanted to see the film too. The name of Jessica's friend was also Helen! She appeared to be a nice girl and we went to the cinema all together. Jessica asked me if I had already seen the film.